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| Haruku 2007-12-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was REALLY good. Like 'oh-my-fridging-god' goodness. Cool. The evil perv dies. Sigh, why are all the stepdads seemingly perverted and abusive? I |
| China Doll Rockstar 2007-07-12 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a super awesome story ! I love it. Lol. |
| super happy nuclear girl 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abuseI love this. Bang, bang. creepy, in a funny, indifferent sort of way. :) |
| Dalamar's Girl 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuseWow..epic! Really twisted and interesting! I like how the friend is so loyal and I like how Sam is so innocent seeming. I don't know what to say but it was well written! |
| Ashes 2007-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseOk, now everyone is going to hate me, but I don't believe in saying nice things to make someone feel all warm and fuzzy inside. The plot and the idea behind this story is great, the ending twist is wonderful, it is just poorly written. The entire thing would be great if some more time was taken on it. The story needs more descriptions, like what Marian looks like, what the gas station looked like, smelled like. Get all five senses into this thing and it will be great. I do like how he was called 'the step-dad' like a nameless monster. |
| Professional scatterbrain 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abuseHaunting. Very, very, haunting. |
| tearitrightup 2006-09-06 ch 1, | abuseSO GOOD@ omg. |
| seraphim-rush 2006-06-24 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant! |
| Damaged 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow. I didn't expect it to end like that! I figured Marian would go back to the police station and they wouldn't believe her. Again. Very nicely written! You have so much talent! Keep this up! I'll have to come back and read some more of your writings when I have more time. Until then! ~Damaged~ |
| King Patch 2006-03-02 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant short story -poetic justice, themes that you handle well enough to keep them from being cliche, characters that are layered and developed despite the shortness. Very very good. |
| girl without wings 2005-12-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is a wonderfully told story, and I love it. Andrea is the most enigmatic character in the entire thing; at times profound, at times cliche, at times too absurd to be either of those things. You wonder if she could ever be real. |
| The Watched 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abuseOnce again, brilliant! I love the way you look into the minds of people we, as a society, would consider "sick" in some way, and sort of uncover the logic in what they are doing. These are making less and less sense since it's getting later, but please, forgive me. |
| strawberries'n'sugar 2005-08-23 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. This one made me laugh too. Heh, I like Andrea. Seriously, seriously great writing. You are awesomely talented. Sorry for all the ** reviews. But this story is amazing. B. |
| ginni 2005-07-01 ch 1, anon. | abusehonestly, i only liked this story for the store clerk. just kidding. you're sensational. if you stopped writing i'd commit suicide. |
| jammi 2005-06-25 ch 1, | abuseDude, that story, brilliant. The whole set up, and the dialogue, amazing. I could imagine the whole thing. The ending was perfect. |