Reviews for It's Not my Fault

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sensitiveangel 2008-03-27 ch 9,	abuseahaha ok first of all I love the pencil and would like to see more of him (my favorite was when he was yelling at her for chewing on his arse) and OH YAY THERE'S A BOY THERE'S A BOY THERE'S A BOY!
sensitiveangel 2006-08-28 ch 6,	abuseyay! I have a special place South of the South Pole! Thank you for adding me to your thankyous :-)
kt in the sky 2005-02-27 ch 6,	abuseHI! i'm sorry i havn't been reveiwing at all it makes me feel ashamed. i think i accedentaly exed you of of my alert list and then i had to go and then i forgot to put you back on the alert list. but right now i'm gonna clikc the litle square. so your back on my author alert list again! me missed you and youir random little stories! me must read the rest to make it up to you.
kemushi caterpillar 2005-02-24 ch 9,	abuseI take it this story's kinda discontinued? Maybe you'll update more. I'm sorry to say the one that you stumbled apon won't be updated until I finish Whoosh! probably. Poor Moshi-moshi, it really is rad. How 'bout a deal. You write another chapter, I write another chapter. Fair? Okay. Shake hands. extends hand OOPS! TOO SLOW! whips it back and cackles
kemushi caterpillar 2005-02-24 ch 8,	abuseFirst, love the warning at the top. Yay! No more song lyrics! Deja vu? How odd. Deja vu? How odd. Deja vu? How odd. Sorry, I'll stop. Diggin the dialect. Is like, English or something... If he's yummy, tell me what he looks like. Oops, I wasn't gonna say no more about the lack of description, sorry. ^_^; I'm wiggin' out here, man! yeah, it was crazy enough. Gods, I'm being way too sensible about this stuff. I should just apriciate the awesome queerness without complaint!
kemushi caterpillar 2005-02-24 ch 5,	abuseso. confused. Oo. I could sing all the words to that song too, because I am such a nerd. What's with the French theme? God. Are you frikin' French or something? Yeah, maybe I little more happenin' and a little less dialogin' would make me less confuzzled, or, perchance, cunfuzzling's what you're going for. Hard to say.
kemushi caterpillar 2005-02-24 ch 4,	abuseWell, it made no sense, but now I hafta go watch Moulin Rouge. That's my favorite movie, doncha know. And probably the only reason I can sing along to that song. ^_^ Gle!
kemushi caterpillar 2005-02-24 ch 3,	abuseW. T. F. This is so strange. Yet... rad... I love the pencil, and Beardo female. But, I must tell you, the writing itself is still not up to par. Good concept, bad delivery, that's what I'm getting from this. Still, I'm acting pretty hypocritical, 'cause I'm still gonna read it. And I'll stop nagging you, because I figure once or twice will get the message.
kemushi caterpillar 2005-02-24 ch 2,	abuseI love freaky-deaky and dead as a dead thing. I'm going to steal them. And I love Thomas, but if he's so hot, what does he look like. And don't you dare say "hot as a hot thing" you little pole-pig! Yeah, I dunno what a pole-pig is... Okay, I say it again, capitalization. I think you learn it in, oh, second grade maybe. And description! Ew! I'm so repetative! This is very funny, and very clever so far. I can tell you're a smart person with decent talent.
kt in the sky 2004-09-02 ch 9,	abusenow that was pointless and annoying. i have you on my alert list so i can read stuff. not so you can jam up my inbox. lol, just kidding, not TRYING to be mean. am i being mean? i'm just saying. i love the title to this ch. though. :-)
Guenivere17 2004-08-27 ch 8, anon.	abuserandomness is good, and i should know, because quite often i just randomly - LALALALALA sharkies swimming in little circles with the kittens and the orange is talking to the stone soup bowl... see what i mean? hits side of head repeatedly in an attempt to stop the voices anyways, i like your story and the randomness is good, but a bit less of that and a bit more of a plot might be nice. erm, thats really all i can think about. other than if you like POTC and you want to read something funny, go to w.nutfiction.net and check out Kate'n'Rose. theyre great. wink wink anyways, keep up the smooth sailing, mate! ~ROSE~
meaningless parasite 2004-08-27 ch 9,	abuseindeed
Lykaios 2004-08-26 ch 5,	abuseyou should put me in there... I am Zen Masteh Sadist...along wit meh faithfuw sidekick, misteh Kinky Man! DUN DUN DUN!
Lykaios 2004-08-26 ch 8,	abuseYou put Jack in there! Jack is my most faithful reviewer! COOL!
Jack Lumber 2004-08-24 ch 8,	abuseI found the secret deja vu thingy! Here it is: HINT HINT HINT HINT skip down a line HINT HINT HINT HINT Yay! Do I win a prize?! Anyway, this is by far the best and funniest chapter yet. I loved it when you did Jack Lumber P.O.V.: insert random thoughts. I laughed out loud on that one. Also, the Llamas where great. It seems that you, like me, like to give storys/chap.s titles that begin with "Attack of the..." (i did, "Attack of the Yawners" and "Attack of the Anorexic Sumo Wrestlers"). Good stuff. I love the edition of the plot ("Plot? What's that?"), it makes the story much more interesting and helps tie the randomes together. The plot is like the "rope" part of a Nerds Rope and the Randomness is the good tasting little bits that stick to it. Without the rope, they all go rolling off into the abyss! Sometimes i worry that my stories are too random. You are truly the Queen of Randomess. I salute you!! Anyway, this review should be longer, so I'll post the lyrics to my favorite song, (Try guessing what it is, although its not that hard): There's a lady who's sure all that glitters is gold And she's buying a stairway to heaven And when she gets there she knows if the stores are closed With a word she can get what she came for Woe oh oh oh oh oh And she's buying a stairway to heaven There's a sign on the wall but she wants to be sure And you know sometimes words have two meanings In the tree by the brook there's a songbird who sings Sometimes all of our thoughts are misgiven Woe oh oh oh oh oh And she's buying a stairway to heaven There's a feeling I get when I look to the west And my spirit is crying for leaving In my thoughts I have seen rings of smoke through the trees And the voices of those who stand looking Woe oh oh oh oh oh And she's buying a stairway to heaven And it's whispered that soon, if we all call the tune Then the piper will lead us to reason And a new day will dawn for those who stand long And the forest will echo with laughter And it makes me wonder If there's a bustle in your hedgerow Don't be alarmed now It's just a spring clean for the May Queen Yes there are two paths you can go by but in the long run There's still time to change the road you're on Your head is humming and it won't go because you don't know The piper's calling you to join him Dear lady can't you hear the wind blow and did you know Your stairway lies on the whispering wind And as we wind on down the road Our shadows taller than our souls There walks a lady we all know Who shines white light and wants to show How everything still turns to gold And if you listen very hard The tune will come to you at last When all are one and one is all To be a rock and not to roll Woe oh oh oh oh oh And she's buying a stairway to heaven Woho!! I love that song.

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