eep! How do you come up with these? You truly have a talent for poetry... Particularly, I love the flow. It's all from one thing to the next, and it has a sense of past, present, and future...

*sigh* well once again, i have to say i love this poem! there is... an essence that seems to write in with the words that doesn't over power the poem but is still there. i really like you you made the refrence about how a story is still there even when the writing stops!
oy btw... i want to see you at fair! so u better show!! or your in BIG truble!
p.s. hola! como estas? (ull understand ^_^)

This is very good! I enjoyed it! Keep up the good work & Keep Writin'! ~*Mettie*~

i like, good job ;)

Very good, very good. I really liked it. It has a sense of age and journey, yet it's new and creative. Keep it up, I like your style of writing.
Check out some of my stuff if you can and keep up the creative work.