Might I add that you shoul update that autobiography? Thought you might need me to yell at you! Get Writing!

Franny

oh that was much better! alot less ruched with alot more details! nice job! the only error I found was that you said 'Why we wait' instead of 'while we wait'. but that was pretty good...oh and i'm sorry, i didn't mean i didn't like your cliff-hanger endings...they're good to have to keep people reading...i was just commenting on how every chapter had one...oh and I'm putting up chapter 21 of Fynncara before i go, it'll be up later tonight...it would have been up last night but we lost power before i could type it up and upload...anyway, nice addition and i look forward to your next update.

-Artemis

It's another lovely chapter by Sketch! I really liked the dialogue, Emalie's reactions to certain things were pretty humorous. Don't worry, I'm always happy to help! :DUpdate soon!~Sage

now that...was really good. cool prophecy. But what is with these cliff-hanger endings? every chapter! well anyway its getting better as you go along. I like Maya. update again soon. -Artemis

ok that chapter was alot better on the details and dialogue. there were a few spelling and grammar mistakes inn chapter 5, i'm telling you now b/c my computer wouldn't let me review chapter 5. Anyway but this was good, i liked it. i think Sean's cool. -Artemis

interesting...very interesting. I liked that chapter alot. though again it seemed a little rushed. I'd go back and add some more details about her sparring and what not like you did with the healing. also you spelled pale wrong when you were talking about Evylyn's eyes. (you spelled it pail). But overall it was pretty good. I'm off to read some more. -Artemis

interesting...very interesting. nice chapter, i like the conflict between Sean and Emalie. the chapter does seem a little rushed though. -Artemis

that was pretty good. the action scene was a little quick and so was Sean's acceptence. but it wasn't too bad. sorry its taken me so long to get to chapter 2. i'm going to read chapter 3 right away. Also just a heads up that I updated Fynncara. I dont remember how far you got but I just put up chapter 20. and you don't have to read it if you dont want to, just givin you a heads up. thanks

-Artemis

A great story, but you need to add more, more, more. I love your story.

Is Maya going to go with Captain and emalie? I'm a little confused by the end of that chapter.

I know I haven't reviewed in a while, but I've gotten this far and I'm wondering what the red book is for. I forgot the king was her father, but now I remember! o_O Got to keep reading...

I like the new chapter! I just thought I would review and tell you to continue. So please update soon!

I like this opening, makes one really interested in what will happen later. the detail is good. i enjoyed reading it

I like the new chapter! I know I say it a lot, but please update soon! I hate suspense.

Yah, you updated! Well, a little short, but it's better than nothing.

The only thing I would add is some more detail, remind the readers how the characters look and their personalities so they dont have to go back to previous chapters to remember. Other than that, it was great.

Well, glad to see that you're working on this again, and hope to read more soon!