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Reviews For: Drip, drip, drip
Raven-ember 2004-11-24 . chapter 1
wow, that was awesome!! very deep and beautiful imagery!! i likes!!
Zombie Zak 2004-10-09 . chapter 1
Interesting.
Jordan Wagner 2004-09-23 . chapter 1
nice. another dream poem. May I reccomend poppy seeds? (Sorry. I say this to everyone.)
giggles for boys 2004-09-03 . chapter 1
Yeah, I'm the first to review this poem ^^ I liked it a lot. The repetition of 'drip' was very nice. It had nice imagery too! One thing that confused me was the last two lines. It says that 'only a single drop, but an ear piercing sound. drip, drip, drip..' To me, it sounded like the whole poem was about one drop, but you say drip three times as if there are multiple drops of blood. But maybe you meant that even a single drop, or all/every single drop had that ear piercing sound! **Keep up the great work
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