So, what? Did you break up w/ her or something? :) I LOVE the way you leave the moment hanging at the end. Bravo.

wonderful really wonderful! really like: is there a good? is there a god?
u have a beautiful way with words!! well done! tanx for ur review please take a luk at one of my storys if u wudnt mind! love ya lots!

I loved the ending! Keep up the great work!

great ending, i applaud you, a very real concept that you wrote excellently on. Great work!

I like this, its very honest. Keep up the good work.
Juliet.