I loved the line, 'just like the ocean, my love for you is vast' and i liked the rhymes in here! great job

Pretty Pretty Pretty Good Shit Yea:
Thulelordster: well, im going to post it on fanfiction tonight. u can check it out there if u want and submit a review
LaXSk8rGuRLY: hmm
LaXSk8rGuRLY: itd be like
LaXSk8rGuRLY: hi jake
LaXSk8rGuRLY: signing a review
LaXSk8rGuRLY: cant really read story now
LaXSk8rGuRLY: loil
LaXSk8rGuRLY: thats what i would do
LaXSk8rGuRLY: and thats bad
Thulelordster: or jsut write 'good shit, keep up the good work'
Thulelordester: oh well, do as u please
LaXSk8rGuRLY: k

always liked this song, glad you decided to post it. really well written.