Amazing. ARGH. Brilliant, wonderful, inspired, inspirING. I loved it. Am off to read more of your works.
Genius. You're a... Genius.

O.O OMG. If I could, I would put this as my number one favorite poem. *dies*
That was great. I loved it so much. So beautiful.
I think I'm going to go cry now. ;_;
~ Dying from the beauty of this poem... ~

hallo! ^^ i read it agin...very good, yis i am finally on fiction press agin...lol
well, great job as usual it is very good, and i like the references to velvet goldmine! sque...
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well, ciao~
--keisi=D

Very interesting. Almost surreal. Although I, being a punctuation **, couldn't stand all the lower case sentences. XD
Tokiko

It's quite funny actually this juxtapostion you have of such profound things you'd like to do, but you end up having a headache doing something you will regret, and you can feel that it's not all what its cracked up to be. Not bad at all, I love it!
-Cindy Moon *)