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| Delaware'sPantomime 2005-03-13 ch 4,  | abuse::To Emily:: Jacey and Seth were supposed to be twins but Jacey had a late birth. That's what I've acquired from Munkymuppet about the five month difference. ANYWAY Munkymuppet, I'm glad you're going to continue this story too and I can't wait for you to post the next chapter. |
| Emily 2005-03-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou're story is very good so far. A few things could use some work, and the paragraphs might be a little too long, but otherwise, it was good. Maybe I missed something, but how is it possible for Seth to be five months older than Jacey? Last time I checked, it took nine months to have a baby. OTherwise, it was very good. |
| MicroArgentina 2005-03-09 ch 4, | abuseWell I'm just glad you're still planning on writing this story as it's so hilarious and I love it. I hope you find a cure for your Writer's Block soon! M.A. |
| lindserly 2005-03-07 ch 3, | abuseyou haven't updated this in a while, and i'm guessing you're not going to? |
| lindserly 2005-03-07 ch 2, | abuseanother funny,entertaining chapter. |
| lindserly 2005-03-07 ch 1, | abuseHey you reviewed my story a long time ago and i FINALLy got around to coming here and reviewing one of yours... at least i think this is my first review here (bad memory)... but anyway this story is hilarious. my favourite line is "and my dad would just have to find some rocks to talk to about drilling" Good job. |
| Delaware'sPantomime 2005-01-28 ch 3, | abuseThis is a hilarious story and I hope you update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens at this family reunion that Jacey's being forced to go to! Keep up the good work and good luck! Ashley |
| MicroArgentina 2005-01-28 ch 3, | abuseOnce again I find myself gasping for breath after the serious laugh attack I just went through. You're really good at describing the horrific relationships between girls and their older brothers (I read "Life As A Teenage Slack Alice" as well) and I was just curious if you didn't happen to have an older brother yourself? This story is pure genius and I love the character of Alex. Wait, I take that back, I love ALL the characters in this story (except the bitchy girls that are supposedly Jacey's friends) and I really can't wait to read more. Please update soon! M.A. |
| risetostardom 2004-08-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story, These people remind me of my family. It's really funny. Can't wait for you to update! |