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Tangerine Tickle
2005-08-20
ch 1,
abuseAnother AWESOME poem with another FANTASTIC ending!! I //loved// how you used that repetitive "Everyone has/is... Even if..." I'm really glad you feel this way; a lot of people in the world should read this poem. :)

~Tangerine Tickle~
CHOO CHOO CHERRIES
2005-07-10
ch 1,
abusewow. This is like my favorite poem. Well I haven't read them all yet, but yea...
Eris Mackenzie
2005-06-28
ch 1,
abuseFor being thirteen, you have a really indepth sense into the human mind. *sounds like Freud* Hehe, but then, I only turned fourteen a month ago so...

HOLY **! A FLOCK-LOAD OF BIRDS! o.0

Erm... sorry, alot of birds just flew past my window...heh...
Sreym
2004-08-01
ch 1,
abuseThis is an AWESOME poem! I love it. I can't believe you're only 13, your language and use of emotions and wording is amazing! This is going on my favorite stories list!
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