I think that this has a couple of really good images in it; "whether we'll killing Mary Sues/Or talking about the color blue", for instance, is a great line. However, I think that it would be a good idea to escape from the couplet rhyme scheme. I've never been big on that particular style, and most of the rhymes in this poem seem a little forced. If you wrote in free verse, you'd have more room for all those images and the emotion you want to get across. Right now, the strange rhyming just gets in the way.

Keep writing!

~Weeba~

*feels uplifted*
Long live the PPC. It is a very special place.
I liked your poem's simplicity--you didn't have to go into flowery prose in order to make the readers feel your emotions. Two things you might want to change: I think you misspelled "beginning," and it would be better to say, "Each of you brightens my day," instead of, "Each of you brighten my day." Other than that, I feel very glad that you've enjoyed your time with us and that we helped assuage a little bit of your grief.
I'm praying for you,
~Araeph

Aw, thanks! Glad that you like us all so much. ^-^ We like you, too, Annalas!
Cheers!
-Cerberus Dis