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Reviews For: My Only Enemy

BLANK00000000000000000 2005-10-10 ch 1,	abuseI totaly understand, and completly agree. This poem was wonderful !
Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-06-13 ch 1,	abusegosh..amazing...beautiful in a twisted way...deep EB
Nianko 2004-10-08 ch 1,	abuseAmaizing
Alleyna 2004-08-11 ch 1,	abuseWow. That is one really touching poem. I can't believe how much that just screams out to me. Really, that's a wonderful piece you have there. I think many can relate to this poem. Alleyna
... 2004-08-09 ch 1, anon.	abusewow
SleepDontWeep 2004-08-04 ch 1,	abuseTHAT WAS UTTERLY ASTOUNDING!! it was just wow okay im at a loss for words it was really nice i cant think of any other words except for horse for some reason but u dont care about that so anyways good job! please check out some of my stuff! xx
William Winters 2004-08-02 ch 1,	abuseSome days are just like that...you just gotta fight it. Anyway, the spaces in between lines need to be removed and this will be a fine work.
DreamNightmare 2004-08-02 ch 1,	abusewow i think this was ur best one! ill ttyl lylas late Skyerz
marshbar960 2004-08-01 ch 1,	abusei feel the same way from time to time, so i can definitely relate. however the poem would be easier to read if it were put together! thanks for sharing and keep writing!
Rozovian G 2004-08-01 ch 1,	abuseWell... Bad stuff always comes first (and generally last longer) : You could press it together a little, it makes it easier to read when one has to scroll to see it all. Also, in between the second 'bite your lip' and 'swallow all the blood' , ther's only a single line break, while there's three of them between the 'drip' and 'words' part below. But now the good stuff: I like it. It's got a point, thought it's a bit hard to really find it. This kind'a sums together what I've been thinking lately. I can't say more than that it's great, yet bad. The bad comes from that it's real.

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