Reviews for First Impressions

Reviews For: First Impressions

what's up world 2004-12-13 ch 2,	abusei find this story hilarious for some reason. i think it's the way they're so overconfident and talking to monsters as humans talk to humans. lol. anyways, im weird like that but...please update soON!
Master D 2004-09-23 ch 2, anon.	abuseAH HA! So this is the story you was talking about! Has Monette read this one yet? I think she should, if you haven't told her about it. She'd flip to see what you wrote about her! But you did a really good job in the descriptions of people, monsters, interactions, etc. Nice.
Rozovian G 2004-08-22 ch 2,	abuseWell, it's interesting. More real action a monster this time, although photonic entity sound more like a sparkling sentient light phenomenon than a standardish monster with a mouth and stuff. "Incoming" sounds cool enough for me to pay another visit some time. Keep at it.
Kattalyn 2004-08-01 ch 1,	abuseWell I must say that was one great chapter, truely entertaining. The characters are written so well, that I can actually think it's real. Good work!!
The Crimson Angel Of Time 2004-08-01 ch 1,	abuseRozovian G: Actually, he does know what he is. He always has. But he couldn't give that info to an enemy. The less that the enemy you're fighting knows about you, the more advantages you have against that enemy. First rule of warfare: Never reveal anything to the enemy. 'F' believes in that one rule more than anything as it's the only reason why he's stayed alive so long. When Lia told him what she was, that was the only thing that made him reveal his secret to her. If she hadn't said anything, that fight probably would've ended up with her getting seriously hurt or killed.
Rozovian G 2004-08-01 ch 1,	abuseHow did it go from "I don't know what I am" to "...I'm Class S" ?? It's a cool story othervise, but that thing bothers me. I mean, you have wonderful characters, details, both the fun and the action, the love part works... But you've got to clear out that detail about how he went from dunno to class s. If you don't know how, let me give you this interesting suggestion: he was just kidding, although there is a class s, which Lia knows. from there, he's brought to HQ, and things start explaining themselves, except he's now held there, both for examination and for potential espionage or interfaring or something... Well, that's my thoughts of it.

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