FictionPress.com - let the words flow
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: A Lack of Color
Aire1
2004-11-22
ch 1, 		abuseWell, that was dark :) I like your use of adjectives. But what was used to kill her parents? And why? Overall, I like it.
MoonLitDemon
2004-08-03
ch 1, 		abuseTalk about action. At first, the reader feels a bit confused and jumbled. Very realistic. I could feel the fear, the anticipation. Nice climax.
Happy Hunting,
MOONLITDEMON
Return to Top