Ooh I like this, it's really dark :) I'm so glad you got a fictionpress account!

great, its not something i want to add to favs but you have some kewl talent.

I really like this. Very good.
Sorry, I don't know what else to say. It's creative, and very...good. :)
Check out some of my stuff if you can. That would be appreciated.
Keep up the creative work.