The sudden shift from a hapless romance to a twisted saw-esque murder is genius, if only you dedicated a considerable amount of length.

psychopathic sorta... but i dnot think "Caldwell" would pull such a thing, if u know who i mean... Nice one though, very imaginative...

I love this story! I really hope that you continue writing it! At first I thought that this was going to be an awkward bulky man hitting on the asian woman, but lol, it's better that that!
-Amber

Let me begin this review by announcing that you are COMPLETELY INSANE...but this in a a good way. Well done, well written. Amusing, in a slightly...morbid...way. Good job.

Sorry this is too **-erotic to read. Your description of him sounded like a huge phallus.