|Reviews for This Storm|
| FairyTaleDreams 5/23/13 . chapter 38
Loved Zack and Winter was the cutest character ever :) Great story!
| Dominique Diane 4/1/13 . chapter 38
I can't believe that Joshua Crowne sold the house, fired Victoria and isn't giving money to Zack! Oh dear lord, I miss Leo! Great story, took me 1 week to finish it (vacations got in my way)
| glowingstar101 12/21/12 . chapter 38
THIS IS OFFICIALLY MY FAVORITE STORY ON FICTIONPRESS (I think?) LOL this was seriously so sweet and exciting :)) great job!
| glowingstar101 12/19/12 . chapter 8
Winter and Tristan are so cute! Can we have them together? :)) haha but I like Zack too :p
| leavesfallingup 11/22/12 . chapter 8
Tristan and Winter truly do think of themselves as brother and sister if they can be in that position and experience no feelings beyond kinship. For the first few chapters I imagined that Tristan might develop feelings, but if her wearing his clothes and sleeping in his lap didn't provoke certain ideas, then it is safe to assume that they will never develop romantic feelings.
Tristan was right about one thing: Zach is pursuing the wrong girl.
| leavesfallingup 11/22/12 . chapter 6
It seems a little weird for Winter to ask Eva if she would like to date Zack while she is wearing the boy's jacket; a little psychological puzzle there? As in: saying one thing while trying to communicate another?
| leavesfallingup 11/22/12 . chapter 5
Will Zach become the wedge that drives Winter and Eva apart. That would be sad, especially since your summary suggests that he will be leaving soon.
| leavesfallingup 11/22/12 . chapter 4
Clearly Winter was bothered by Zach's unkind denial of any interest in her and his clear interest in Eva. She is a good friend, but that doesn't make her immune to an interest in boys.
Tristan and Eva's father needs to step up before he destroys his family. Both mother and father seem to have divorced their children as well.
| leavesfallingup 11/22/12 . chapter 2
You do like to build up the mystery. Zack seems interesting. If he isn't stalking her, then what is he doing?
| leavesfallingup 11/22/12 . chapter 1
Divorce can be incredibly ugly and the children often suffer the worst. From your opening chapter I sense that the father is an authoritarian control freak who held the power throughout the marraige and continues to in divorce... is that correct? Or was there something else involved that would give him the leverage to gain full-custody, such as infidelity?
Your final sentences were highly cryptic... which is what you intended, of course. A good beginning.
| 21221012508401 10/10/12 . chapter 14
I know that it's been stated quite obviously that there is nothing romantic between Winter and Tristan, but I still hoped and wanted to see it happen just because to me, their characters would just mesh so well. But alas, reality, thou art a bitch.
| tenna shut up 8/16/12 . chapter 23
not cool Zack, not cool :(
| tenna shut up 8/16/12 . chapter 20
your boy is too much, you're killing me here. lol Eva :(
| tenna shut up 8/16/12 . chapter 17
if i squint i see another Zach when Zack says principessa :) i need to stop now but maybe this is the life he could have had but nah anyways
Zack's always called her princess Winter and now well the italian equivalent
i like how Winter and Zack are developing :) and you're supporting characters are really endearing
| tenna shut up 8/16/12 . chapter 15
what are you two doing? i mean i know that they're friends now and eva and winter aren't exactly having the best time in bestfriendland and eva kind of sucks at the moment but this is weird... really weird, how does this work? hahaha this is sooooo messed up... lovely all the same though