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| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-05-28 ch 1,  | abusei love this! i can really picture it being said to someone, im not too keen on the very ending with the repetition on "shade" in the last 4 lines, it just lacks the closure that would have been great for this, as i expected it to rhyme with something and not just be repeated, it kinda stopped my image and i was really aware of it, anyway, i like all the rest of this, espcially the parts like "unmade and unbroken" and all the parts about fairies and stars, very pretty x weasel within x |
| youzi 2005-03-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is really sweet and pretty..loved "Porcelain faeries" and "For tomorrow's a promise Unmade and unbroken". Nice work! Keep it up =D |
| idontknowwhoiamanymore 2005-01-14 ch 1, | abuseI love it...I'm going to sing it to the girls I babysit, it's very serene...not quaint...serene. |
| Toast n Guitars 2004-11-22 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. I really like it. It would be interesting to hear it put to guitar. If you ever do, you should post your cords up as well. -Toast |
| ThoseRainyDays 2004-10-03 ch 1, | abuseAmazing! You are so talented. I'm jealous! >.< All of your work is so good...adding you to my favorite list right now! -Rainy |
| noodlegirl 2/8 2004-08-06 ch 1, | abusevery good you're obviously talented |