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| sensitiveangel 2006-08-28 ch 3,  | abusewowwie more hot than orlando bloom? I would certainly like to see this fellow :-) Anyway, I like this a lot. It's great to see a story that applies to real life and that we can all relate to. |
| SukieSukie RaRa 2004-10-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseDUDE! |
| Jack Lumber 2004-08-22 ch 3, | abuseThis started out good. But then you were just bored a lot. Start saying that you're doing funny things. I have only one other complaint: You said your crush's initials are JC, but last i checked, they were JL (que applause). This was the best yet in my opinion. I loved the beggining. |
| Jack Lumber 2004-08-22 ch 2, | abuseVery odd. You should keep this going, but make some stuff up. And try to keep on the same subject for longer (but make sure you keep it funny). I liked the peanut thing and the stew. |
| Horny Toad 2004-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey good job! Very funny. You should try reading some stuff by Genius_Ben or Aillil. (They're my favourites) you might like it! |
| Jack Lumber 2004-08-05 ch 1, | abuseIt was odd. Not too bad, but ive seen funnier. I would give it a B but i hate rap music (Pink Floyd,The Eagles,and Led Zepplin rule!!). So you get a C. It could use more jokes. I bet a lot of stuff would be funny to you're friends but not to people who don't know you. This is supposed to be constructive critisism, sorry if i sound harsh. Try reading some more stories for insperation. I suggest this one: http://w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1671631 |
| kt in the sky 2004-08-05 ch 3, | abuse10 double sided shets of amth h/work?? i HET math. math is absolutely totally all to was very evil (in a very bad and evil way) write more! |
| kt in the sky 2004-08-04 ch 2, | abuselol! a peanut? you're serioouse arn't you... this is so funny. :^P |
| Genius-Ben 2004-08-03 ch 1, | abuseInteresting... |
| kt in the sky 2004-08-03 ch 1, | abusehey, I like it! here are some false names: katie, matthew, megan, hannah, betsy, john, mark, sapphire, jenny, jennifer, kathy, heidi, amy, kat, kay, alex, ben, erin...ok I'll stop now. :^D there you go! but anyway keep posting! (and dont worry about the talking to a book thing. I think everyone who keeps a diary/journal does it...dont ask why, but...) |
| sensitiveangel 2004-08-03 ch 1, | abuseVery funny! I like it. Maybe I should try keeping a diary... |