Since the date of when you last updated is a few years ago, i guess you're not going to finish this. But please do.

I like how everyone has their own little personal story. It's really good. =)

this story is so sad!, i feel bad 4 nathan! so far from all ur stories , i luv them

Oh I DO!! I think that Raye is very courageous for telling Luke how she feels but it was kind of mean of her to hurt him like that. Nathan is really a good person. I hope everything works out for him. He deserves it. Lol. You're a great writer. Stick to it!!

Ah finally, the last chapter. Now I have to wait patiently for the next chapter like everybody else...Oh well, its worth it. :)

Oh, so many twists and turns... just the way I like it!Poor Melanie... she's like a magnet for trouble!

Ok, so I got a bit carried away... hehe..No! Not the baby! Oh, does anything good happen to them?

Aha! I can see Haylie is going to be a very interesting character! Oh no! Dont tell me Eric's going to keep Melanie against her will!! Ah! Great chapter.

Oh no! I sense trouble...

Ah, an exciting chapter! I thought melanie was going to be happy now! oh well... its your story and i know whatever you write will be great.

First of all... HAPPY BIRTHDAY! This is the first time i'm reading the story so its all new to me. I think ur doing a great job! I didnt know raye was that sneaky!

oh, why doesnt Raye just tell him!

oh no, he isnt interested in her!! aarghh...

And so the plot thickens!

When will the action start? Hopefully the next chapter will be more interesting like you said...