Reviews for Dylan's Shadows Rewrite

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V.E. Silber 2007-06-07 ch 4,	abuseWell, that was a /little/ disappointing, but if only bc it remains unfinished so soon sigh it definately looked as if it had a /lot/ of potential, & i could have sworn that i'd read a story almost /just/ like it back when still had an original fiction section. i thought it might b the same story. might still be - i didn't read the original version of this story u have posted here. though that other story was written by a guy... i think (or at least some1 who said they were a guy but psht honestly, like guys write slash stories, really). mayb they're just really similar stories. i dunno. it's a good story, however, & it'd b really nice if u'd continue it, but i know better than any1 how it can b when so much time goes by after a story & u just kind of loose the thread & the inspiration 4 it. well, take care & thanks 4 liking my story Heart Of Glass (it'd be REALLY nice if u'd review...), sadly, however, the story, like this 1, will never b completed sigh i wrote it like two years ago & it's been posted on 4 the longest time. well, take care. much love; i remain cordially yours, V.E. Silber
bansira 2007-03-02 ch 4,	abuseWow, interesting story! The characters are pretty much adorable. asmazing, even. I like Brian, he seems fun! xD
Mical Alexander 2006-10-19 ch 4,	abuseSoo...are you going to keep going? I hope so. This is really good, as I'm sure you know. Good solid characters and excellent dialouge. Wit is appreciated! I'm alerting this story in hope that you're still working on it.
Walter Dash 2005-07-31 ch 4,	abuseplease continue
get-it-on65 2005-07-01 ch 1,	abusewhen are you gonna update?this is great.luv cesca, x
M L 2005-05-28 ch 4,	abuseThis is really interesting. You're characters all work with each other well, without using blatant steriotypes.
Posterior Praiser 2005-03-02 ch 4,	abuseEep! this story is so cool. I like all of the contrasts in personalities. It's really neat to read. Hope you update soon ^^
Staris 2005-02-27 ch 4, anon.	abusesorry it's been so long since i reviewed! ack, forgive me lol anyways, i like Darren alot!! haah he's so cute!
Staris 2005-02-27 ch 2, anon.	abusei still love Kyle lol haha "gotta love Spain" amen!!
creepy-crawler 2005-02-26 ch 4, anon.	abusethis is so good! please update real soon I'll be waiting... holding my breath until you update! holds breath you dont want me to die from lack of air, do you?? SO UPDATE! =D
Valoria Gilden 2005-01-15 ch 3,	abuseMore slashfiction! Poor Tyler. He makes you want to hug him for hours and drone into his ears that it'll be alright. And it will be alright, right? Right? Update as soon as you can ^^ (Wouldn't want to be putting you under pressure now, would we? Shifty eyes)
Nothing Profound 2004-12-15 ch 3,	abuseUpdate!!
LadyFalcone 2004-11-28 ch 3,	abuselove it. keep going
Staris 2004-11-27 ch 3, anon.	abuseomgosh!! i so totally forgot about the introduction of the land lord lol He's really really creepy, and as Miss Wendy put it i believe, 'a bastard'! ah did he not notice the poor kid's pain? hahah i can't wait till you introduce the rest of the characters!! ah this is going to be an awesome story... >.> i can feel it... bwahahah cough er,and no i don't know how to fix the new FP things! gah i know what you mean though!! i just updated and i couldn't do the stars and smilies i like sobs... But if i find a way i'll let ya know! anyways, now there needs to be a non-addictive way to take away all of Tyler's pain... hm... i wonder what we could give him... Sex? well he's getting that... (though he doesn't want it), a house?? (got one, but at a very very rough cost) love? (YES! lol) so when are we going to meet lover boy eh? and i know you're probably going to add loads of conflict, BUT as long as Tyler has hope i'm all good!! ^^ or you could just ignore my ramblings...lol anyways Go Spain!! lol Great chapter!!
princess max 2004-11-27 ch 3,	abuseWow, you finally updated! Eh, don't worry about reviewing my stuff, I'm going to write regardless of whether or not anyone reviews it. I don't know how to fix fictionpress removing lines and stars, either, unfortunately:-( Poor Tyler. His landlord is an absolute bastard, although Tyler himself seems quite...strong, despite his painkiller addiction. The poor kid, I must know why it is he isn't at home. Darren/Dyland, bah! My mind works stupidly. I don't know what to do about Hood, or Kenji. They both amuse me, so I'm sure you'll come up with something fitting!

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