Good poem! =) Almost sounds kind of like a song lol for some reason when I read a poem I can automatically add a tune behind it -.-" Kind of stupid...but yeah. =P Good job! If you have time, check out "The Search" and R&R!

This is great...I didn't even realize it rhymed, until I went back and looked, it sounded so natural. Well-written, and gorgeous ending. I lot that bit about the candle. :)

Hmm.. maybe I should dance away all my troubles to. This poem made me smiled when I read it. I absolutely loved it. Brilliant job!

Yay! I don't know, but this makes me happy for some reason. *does a dance for the heck of it then stops after realizing how stupid she looks doing so* I like the candle symbolism and everything. Wonderful! Yay again! (Me? Sugar? What are you talking about?)