This is incredible in it's detail, and the pacing of this story is great- never a dull moment, and the emotional temperature is well modulated.
Nice. I fully intend on reading the rest of the series. ;)
Erisah

Great story! Please continue writing, I can't wait to see what happens to Kerianna. Does she go to spy on the Nami?

yummy goodness.

Funny and well written. I'm still not too sure if I like Mayhem or not. Destruction is awesome, and both Nemisis and Chaos are without limits. Your premise is freah and imaginative. Development is structured and sound, although I think Chaos had the worst of it. Going on to read more of the triology. Thanks for sharing!

Hey, this is really cool. I like the names of the Aganom ... (I forgot! >_

HEY! i really like this story! ^_^Its awesome! i dont know if its done, though it sounds like there may be more (plz?) i do want to know the other stories that come after (plz write them on another chapter?) thanks! ^_^

HAhaHAha, didn't expect to see this, though i should have seen it coming with the mentioning of the word Courtesan, lolz. is this a sign of things to come? well only one way to find out. I'll be readin the rest of ur stuff, good **.

this is pretty good, sorta reminds me of this one thing i read up in class, pygmalion. well that story is about taking a street girl and training her to fool everyone that she's royalty. well the diffrences between the two r obvious, but still... all in all i find this very interesting and i look forward to reading to whole series.

I'm guessing this is the end of this particular story, which is a shame as I've been enjoying it these last few months or so.
However, this seems like an appropriate place to end this part of the tale, unless there is something else that I don't know about.
I've enjoyed this enough that I now plan to read the other parts of the trilogy, so if nothing else you've got at least one new dedicated reader out of it!
Spawny

Cool story. Update soon!

Wow, I love it! Im glad she got stuck with a good name

Oh look! More! And I only demanded more just this morning! You certianly are fast.
Hee hee hee, Keri has strange psychic powers. How entertaining. How much longer is isolation going to last? It's pretty mean to make them think that their sponsers and such have turned their backs on them, but I can see the point of it. It does make them closer...and stronger too.
It was very mean of them to cut Keri's hair. I hope she kicks some ** when isolation ends.
~Never Knows Best~

This is one of the best chapters yet. A few minor editing faults but nothing too serious or glaring.
And I'm glad I didn't have to wait so long for an update this time!...lol
Spawny

I was starting to think you'd forgotten about this story, so it's good to see you finally update it again.
The shorter chapters definately help in holding the readers attention, as does the fact there are less scenes each time.
The ritual in particaular was handled extremely well, I felt, and I look forwards to another update soon.
Spawny

Excellent, excellent, excellent! I loved the story. I only have one minor complaint. There isn't more!!
But seriously, the characterization is excellent, and I love the backstory you've put into it with the history of the Kingdom and the Kings and the different races like the Nami. The lineage markings is a very interesting concept and it adds depth to the story.
I have to say that Destruction is my favourite character. He's just so damned amusing.
And I also thought that the Courtisen ceremony was very cool, and it was written well, and not too smutty (is that even a word) Nice to know someone still has tact on this site.
Oh, what else?
Oh yes, and I also like that you didn't feel the need to make all your characters young and sexy. The fact that Nemesis is the one that bought her, and he's kinda old, is a refreshing change from the usual cliche.
One thing I noticed though, is that you've repeated words very often and it gets rather monotonous. Remember, thesaurus is your friend.
I shouldn't say anything. I'm guilty of the same thing.
All in all, wonderful story and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
~Never Knows Best~