The strikes a vivid image in my mind.

Scary good.

This is well done. The rhyming pattern is consistent and the meaning is obvious without being blatant. I have two complaints: "A painful SEEN" should be "A painful SCENE", and I'm not sure you meant "An unpaid TOIL"...was it supposed to be TOLL? The second one I'm not sure about, but toll rhymes better with soul, and a toil can't exactly be paid...
This is really good, I liked it a lot. Just those two mistakes that distract from the meaning and flow of the poem...

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Very nice poem. I like the repetition of the A. Only a few typos.