Hunni, you REALLY gotta update. I'll be watching for it!

You have an interesting story line here. Why does it say that this was published in August last year [2004] and updated today [7/7/05] when there is only one chapter? Anyway, please write more soon,

AA

Great story! I like it, keep going!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

Hmm, he actually sounded kinda immature there. It gave me an image of him being about a foot shorter and stuttering.. hmm. Personally I think you'd have to develope his character if you were going to pair those characters.

A little odd in places but sounds like it could turn into a really good fic :)

AHA!
Wondered about u.
Yes. I like. Lol. You must update!
What happens? Is Gary a future love interest of Teri? Is Matt?
Eh? EH?!
ok.
ciao.
-Veronica

So far this story is pretty good. There's a few typos, for instance, you meant to write got, but you accidentaly typed a d where the t was supposed to be. lol. that's kinda funny.
I'm curious to see how things go with this Gerry fellow, but I'm also ancsiously (spl?) waiting to see what will happen in The Journal.
~*R.M.Whitaker*~

Good story i like how it's going so far. I hope you continue fast