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| Miss Spendin' 2005-06-30 ch 7, anon. | abusei love you AOTS! you updated (even if i'm late on the review) and it was great. just continue to update and at least finish the story for me. |
| cat 2005-06-07 ch 6, anon. | abusehey love your story...keep it up |
| Miss Spendin' 2005-05-30 ch 6, anon. | abusehey mel. look your storys great and i know that you have gotten reveiws for it within the last 4 days so will you please just update your damn story (please) your writing skills are great and the story has great potential the only thing stopping it the fact that you don't update. so do me and all your fans a favor and UPDATE! |
| dog toy 2005-05-27 ch 6, anon. | abuseyea like dude i totadlly lov eur story man...ur like a great writer so keep it up ...well see u man |
| cat liter 2005-05-26 ch 6, anon. | abusehey u r very good writing these story...keep ot up i enjoy ur story lots...hope u write more of these...i just love it |
| breeze 2005-05-25 ch 6, anon. | abusehey..i love ur story...u have a very good, smart head...u should use it more...make more story...love ur story so much i read it again |
| breeze 2005-05-24 ch 6, anon. | abuseit was so interesting... i love it so much... keep up the good work... |
| sephirothleo1 2005-05-24 ch 6, anon. | abusenot a bad story at all! |
| anpnymous 2005-05-23 ch 6, anon. | abuseStop after 6? the story isnt done and i want to hear the rest. Obviously the character development is very good, because i already feel very attached to them, and must continue their journey with them. I, as a common reader, grow close to their emotions...if you can do the same with the plot and imagery, one gets very deep in to the story. I feel like i must continue reading. Its the sort of story where once you start reading, you do not want to stop, and I see that as reason enough to continue it. And hot asian girls do NOT chuckle...they have a blissful laugh that is soothing to the heart. |
| Rei 2004-11-29 ch 6, anon. | abusecathes ur attention instantly...can't wait 4 the next chapter |
| its me 2004-09-15 ch 6, anon. | abusehello ok keep it a romance section (i like romance storys) and i like it |
| kiwi93089 2004-09-02 ch 6,  | abuseyes we love you and your wonderful stories! lol keep up all the good work minor editing issues but very good! peacies kiwi |
| Sailor Fantasy Dragon 2004-08-25 ch 5, | abuseTis me! (SFD...Hardy Har Har!) Cool story so far. Nice to see that you keep the chapters long! ^_^ Keep it up! |
| kiwi93089 2004-08-13 ch 4, | abusego mel go! lol omg my mom helped me wiht my hair and it looks all anime-ish ^.^ I wish the the best of luck for your story! I really hope you do continue and publish it! |
| toffee 2004-08-08 ch 3, anon. | abusehey great story so far update soon :D |