The part about the red rose petals of liquid stained glass was beautiful...Remins me of a throat being cut, & all these luscious beads of red glistening as they spurt out. Not in a gorey way, just in an infatuated one. Very pretty...

Good poem. "silken whispers Hushed" and "liquid Stained Glass" are the kind of phrases that thrill the poet in me.

wow That was cool. Nicely written and very delicate as well. Like a spider web o.o Congratulations :) One part i thought was particularly good was the full stop after 'hushed' beautiully written. Oh, and thank you for the review :)

good poem. made me think

Emotional. This is fantastic. By the way, your PeanutButterMarchpane poem is really cute! It's catchy. I've been repeating it over and over...hopefully it won't get stuck in my head. Lol. )