This poem rocks...(Totally Yes)...I love how it all fit ...u drew me in...very cool

I love it! I'm putting you on my fav aouthors list!
This is brilliantly written! I read in your bio that you're putting together a book of poetry and to point out any mistakes. I did notice one in this. The first line of the 3rd stanza "You new how I felt," that 'new' should be 'knew'

im your first reveiwer and all i have to say is...wow