I even understood the metaphoricness! Go me! Yeah... How do you come up with metaphors that work? I can never do that... So, really good poem. I like. I'm glad it's all better now.
~avidelecteur

The smooth way you go from one line to the next.. without an obvious rhyme at all, and connecting each one so rhythmically and perfectly. Bravo.

im glad its better
awesome poem.. amazing extended metaphor!

The emotion carries through in piquant images.

Very nicely written, definatelly enjoy the metaphores to the clouds and the sun. I'm glad things are all better now.

Very discriptive. There's a definate passion and anger in your words. Glad it's all sorted! Well done.

hey
that was an awesome poem! i love the way u connected ur anger with the sun and the clouds. thats really cool! nice poem! glad ur okay with ur frined now.
chek out ym stuff too plz. thnx
kiran

It paints a very visible picture. Good job.

Pretty. Not your best, but it's still nifty. *applause*