I loved the ending! How it suddenly goes from being at peace and happy to thanks for bothering me...you pulled that together well, great job again.

Morbid Maxwell

I think this would be my theme song, if I had one... lovely.

Trippy i love it

Ah, the everpresent, efflorescent dream world. Vile thing it is. Awesome poem. Keep Writing.
Katlyn

its nice, it starts off angsty and turns into a humor of sorts, i like _, anyway keep up the good work my friend, you are good at conveying your emotions through words
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