great story so far keep it up!

I'm relieved to see that Grey is more than just a professional after all(then again, maybe he is ;)). Who would have known Eriol was royalty? The love scene was tastefully done, but it remains to be seen if Grey really loves Eriol or lusts for him.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

So far so good. Grey's personality comes off as that of a professional; the kind of guy who's going through all of this effort because its a job. Eriol seems to be a sympathetic sort who just wants to figure out what's going on. This being a shonen-ai, I hope that those two become an item.

The fight scene between Eriol and Grey was well written and I could easily envision it taking place.

The students and the teacher do seem almost non-existent and could use some fleshing out.

Will the sea creature ever make an appearance again? The way it zeroed in on Grey was frightening. Does it have to subsist on magical energy or does it simply not like Grey?

Other than a sentence that used the word "blood" a few too many times it was an enjoyable read. I'm eager to read the next section.

Great continuation...though I don't know what the HELL is going on. ;-) Kudos.

Excellent! Where is part two? 'm dying to know what is going on...

Great coninuation with a surprising twist. Kudos.

Fantastic beginning. It's a very exciting story so far. Kudos.

i like it so far ... hope you continue with it..:)