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Tangerine Tickle
2005-08-20
ch 1,
abuseThe rhyming and choice of words made the poem almost bittersweet. . . Beautiful.

~Tangerine Tickle~
winter's requiem
2005-08-06
ch 1,
abuseAt first I was a bit confused, but then I re-read it and what I'm getting is a sort of stream-of-consciousness piece :). Interesting. I find it a little more light-hearted than you probably intended, especially in the beginning, although you started dramatically enough. I enjoyed it :).
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