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| Tangerine Tickle 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseThe rhyming and choice of words made the poem almost bittersweet. . . Beautiful. ~Tangerine Tickle~ |
| winter's requiem 2005-08-06 ch 1, | abuseAt first I was a bit confused, but then I re-read it and what I'm getting is a sort of stream-of-consciousness piece :). Interesting. I find it a little more light-hearted than you probably intended, especially in the beginning, although you started dramatically enough. I enjoyed it :). |