I thought this was beautiful. The rythm is a little off in some places but it is really a great poem otherwise. keep up the good work.

Absolutely beautiful. In a roundabout way, I'm returning the favor (I believe you've reviewed some of my stuff before) and thanking you for reviewing "revinyesvr"'s stuff. He's a friend of mine (in real life) and we both appreciate it.

Beatiful prayer well done !!

~* Noelle *~

Oh, I really like this one ... especially the lines, "May my angel be my shoulder, always there when others aren't,And my backbone when I'm trying hard to reach a dear friend's heart." Two thumbs up! I shall now go read some more.P.S. Thanks for r&r-ing ^_^!

P.P.S. "Boys are like lava lamps, fun to look at, but not so bright." ~Unknown

Hey Lauren! I never realized how good of a poet you are. Lol, that sounds weird coming from my mouth, but I'm serious. I love this poem, it's like you and I go through the same things. Luv ya, Jess

really cool, i especally liked the prayer-like format, it really suited the feel and images portrayed in this poem. really nice work, Keith Andrew

I believe that everyone has guardian angels. cool poem.

I liked this alot. It rhymed, and yet it still sounded like a sincere prayer. I also like the fact that you ended in Jesus's name. Very few peoms do that. As for the next few lines, yes, you do need something to tie it all together. But's that's okaay for now. This has a quiet gentle power, and I am more than happy to wait.
-ttfn!

There is no other angel like Jesus. Beautiful poem!
Needa S.

*two thumbs up* I liked this, it flows very nicely. Well written and touching,
-Terra

That was very well written, I love how it rhymed! Wonderful prayer, although you could ask God himself to help you with some of that, since I'm not sure how much of it is in an angels power, they're not as powerful as God, like they are not all knowing, but I'm not sure how much they can do... hm, maybe I should review that study on Angels I did a while ago... where did I put those sheets? anyway, don't mind my rambling, I'm getting tired, obviously (yikes! midnight already?) Once again, I love your writing, and remain one of your fans! keep it up! ^_^

pretty good rhyming scheme but dont overdo the words. other than that nice work.

hey I like this i really great

Hm...i liked it, and i'm not even a religious person. i'm in the religious poems just out of curiosity, and i'm glad i came upon your poem, i thimk its very pretty and very sweet. Nice job.

I'm not much for prayers, or religion in general, but this was nice to read.
And it rhymed! More power to you! ^_^d
btw, is this line: "Let him breathe a breath of calming air over me when I get mad, And let him remind me that I'm still all right when things get really bad." bad formatting, or was it supposed to be all on one line?