A great idea. Some of the lines have great rhythmn, while others are a bit forced.As a teacher myself it really amused me, especially this line"I know each of your lies,I do hope this one is new."

Funny Poem, You switched your style...keep writing.

Poetically Yours,

B. Rosser

LOL! That was really funny and cute you should keep it up. I really like this one. Good work.

N.S

hahahaha! lol! this is really funny i love it!

Your poems really funny. I liked it. IT's a nice touch with the whole whale thing. You know I once told a story like that one once, but I don't think it made me laugh as yours did. I just wanted to say that. Good Job!
-Anuenue

hey pretty gud...i mean not like the dog ate my h.wk **...new n unique...keep it up!!...

This story is great!

Amusing. Interesting poem, I'm not sure I've read another quite like it. Good job.