Gah, this story is super cute, especially the ending. I think that one of the things I liked the most about this story was Dana's personality... just the way that she talks and everything, I guess. Aw and Dana & Adam are super cute together. Ahahahah I totally didn't even realize the Sweet Valley reference until you mentioned it in your disclaimer - I can't believe I even missed that! Considering I used to be obsessed with those twins, haha. Liz & Todd forever :P

Um but yeah. I love Adam & Dana, and I think overall this story is really sweet. It's also an interesting concept too because I know that with all these romance stories I read, it's always so easy to distinguish who will be potential relationship material and who isn't, but then when you actually go out there and are in real life and everything, it's really not that clear at all. So it's just an interesting take on things, and also nice. :)

Keep writing~

-- Alyssa

great story :)

BRILLIANT STORY!
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nice plot.

Love this story =D! Can't wait to read the next chapter >:)
Oh and my science teachers name is Mr.Watson haha xD

Great job, I really liked your story. :)

FINALLY! :D

That's adorable - what happened. And, Matt IS a genius. :)

AW. Adam's got it pretty bad. ;P nice job so far.

That's so cute! The whole bumping in thing, very cliche. Love it. :)

Aww, that was so adorable! I love it!
Great work. Really, this story was fantastic.

Sweet story.

What a cute story! I think it was written really well; the writing was simple and the plot line was easy to follow. I'm glad you didn't have many cliches and not a lot of drama; it makes for a good feel story.

Great job!

That was sweet!

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