You do have a way with words man, Keep it up...by the way, Great Poem.

Poetically Yours,

B. Rosser

Thanks for the awesome review. You're right I just love writing at night is more peaceful and inspiring. I love this poem is sad but very sweet, you have to fight for what you love and can't let it walk out your life. Oh and by the way keep up the great work I want to see one of your new awesome poems up soon. Later

N.S

That's a very truthful, emoional poem

Nice poem, it relates so much to me yet sometimes i feel like i dont have anything to live for. I started to realize that the person who i loved very much was just a fake and using me for my own will. Nice poem and keep the inspiration up and the poems up. See ya...
Unknown...

Hey, it's me from school. XP This is an awesome poem. It's very well described, the rhymes are true and not forced. I love it. Well, I'll see you tomorrow. Byes. ^^

are you speaking from experience? its and awesome poem. so sad yet so truthful at the same time.

awesome poem... i can totally identify, the guy I'm after keeps getting dragged away, and he's the only light in my life... you do a good job describing the way it feels to have them walk away, knowing its out of your control... it's an awesome poem, the rhyme schemes are interesting, not static, like so many are. I like it!

Powerful, you have a lot of voice in this and it almost speaks to the reader instead of just reading the words I could hear them. Keep up the good work.
Juliet.