Well, since my last reveiw didn't go through, I'm gonna write one now. ^_^ I loved this story, I loved the concept of Sari being so de-attached. But...I think the ending was a little rushed. I also think you should probably put a little bit more time in the process of creating Faith, instead of her just being, ya know? But...I really enjoyed the story, made me want to kill Trickster...even though I love him. >.< Anyways, good job! Are you going to still write a sequal?

oh wow...
your story is really, really icredible... you managed to pertray the feelings so well. I wish I could write like that. Its was really moing... everybody died... and when aaron killed himself... wow. I have to say, this is one of the most incredible stories i have ever read on fpress... or anywhere for that matter... just... wow.

Nyo! That was amazing! It really envokes emotion. I'm really impressed with how the narator even being as detactched as she is makes you go from from a feeling of stoicism to happiness to terror to that rising feeling that came with faith. I can only wish I could write like that... I'll just have to do with my own style. Great job!
~~TaigaSama