this was so sad and very well written. a part of me feels bad for Kiran, but then the other part wants to smack him. you're good at making readers confused! i wish Kiran could have a happier life. maybe then he wouldn't be so evil! but this was a great short story!

Didn't review this one like I usually do ... it's too sad to. I cried when he killed the children, but I cried even more when he killed the dog and when he died. *DOOMS Ravaa* We need to kill her ... she needs to be put in RP so ... we can kill her. *grabs machine gun*
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Such sadness ... *gives Kiran bouquet of roses*
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Regina O.B.

Woah!! This was really cool!! Did Kiran die? But he was supposed to kill Ravaa!?!?!!?