i love this story!!please please continue!

Please update soon.

update!

Please update! Im hooked

Ah, more contact between Mr. Other Slave and Mydra! Heehee, very nice, the constant lust that rose wihtin her, the mention of Mydra's culture (luscious fruit to taste, heehee), and the metal on the ankle. *winces* OW. Its very nice that she has a 'friend' now, and that she's getting treated for her wounds. I wonder exactly who Caine is...hmm

UPDATE! I know I'm not the only reader anticipating a new chapter, so I hope to see something soon. Until then...

Cheers!

Ah...a kind figure...heehee, I like it, very nice to meet Mr. Other Slave, who gives Mydra naughy, fun thoughts. Very good descriptions, as in the other chapters, with the blood and the desire to feel his back. Hmm, I wonder what might happen on those cots in time...*grins*

*groans* gah...poor girl. I wonder, have you ever read the series "Kushiel's Legacy" by Jacqueline Carey? I ask because it's slightly similiar with a girl that enjoys the pain as pleasure. Which, by the way, was described supurbly. Amazing chapter, I'm on to read more...

Hmm...more interesting characters. Gah, I don't like 'Phera'...what a freak. But that's just me, and when it come sto things of a sexual nature I definitely like the more...subtle favors in public. Openly stroking yoruself? Gah, not my taste. It was a good character to add though, I'm curious now about Drenovan, and if he is as sexually hyped, though in secret, as his 'sister'.

*continues to the next chapter*

*grins wickedly* It's so hard to find good reads on this site, but I have found a treasure in this one.

The writing is very well-constructed, with the perfect amount of imagery (not lacking and not too much detail), the main character is introduced well, and an interesting character too. The story is off to a great start, and I hope I'll be able to learn a little bit about her past - how did she get into slavery?

And of course...I want to read the goodies that the Master and Mydra might have. *giggles* Onwards to the other chapters!

kya! wheres the update?? please?

nice.

Flaramortis sounds like a weird name. (An inflamed rigormortis?) I found this chapter quite riveting and this is one of my favorite subjects (slve/mstr) which you have depicted well from her pov, using the psychology of someone who has been subjugated. Excellent work. (I like the other names you've picked) ;)

i like it so far

...best erotica so far...reminds me of annrice's the claiming of sleeping beauty.

Great Story! Please Write more!