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| arwen-evenstar89 2004-08-05 ch 1, | wow! Very nice! I liked the rhyme and rhythm... great job. My favorite lines were: You told me to put down my cross/ instead to pick up david's sheild. That seems very figurative, and very cool! Great job- i loved it! ~Lauren |