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Reviews For: Ha Tikva The Hope

arwen-evenstar89
2004-08-05
ch 1,
wow! Very nice! I liked the rhyme and rhythm... great job. My favorite lines were: You told me to put down my cross/ instead to pick up david's sheild. That seems very figurative, and very cool! Great job- i loved it!
~Lauren
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