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Reviews For: Hundreds and Thousands of Miles

teh tarik
2004-10-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseo...deja vu...this conversation is almost like the one I had with a friend in malaysia over the phone...I was calling from new zealand...coincidence. I love the realistic qualities and irony in this piece. Write on~
123
2004-08-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey good job! Very funny. You should try reading some stuff by Genius_Ben or Aillil. (They're my favourites) you might like it!
a e i o u and sometimes y
2004-08-05
ch 1,
abuseThis is so realistic, sadly. But I don't quite understand why you put it up under 'humor'? But it was very well writen.
Morbane
2004-08-05
ch 1,
abuseI'm not quite sure why this is under 'humour' as the joke is rather bitter. Well-portrayed, though - this is extremely realistic, I rather wish it wasn't. Based on anything of your own life? You have an eye, or maybe an ear, for the psychological detail.
aki69
2004-08-05
ch 1,
abuseWow this is excellent keep it up and review mine aswell (its called children of the atom
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