How did you discribe this girl? The vampire bitch I think it was, and her lap dog. I like how you told that story through this.D.

Your peotry is just so beautiful. You have a very interessting way of getting the point across. I like "we never had time for introductions. / Acid was spilling down my eyes / keeping me blind / but self aware to my circumstances." Good stuff!

intresting...i like it...well done

very interesting. i liked this a lot especially "i was too busy/looking for romeo/ who was/unabashedly/boozed up around the corner". awesome poem.

I never know what to make of your poetry. It amazes me that anyone could write so clearly but in such a mixed up way. Really good writing. You got the message across.