I don't think I really understand the full meaning of the poem. But it's definitely interesting and a poem I enjoyed.

Interesting poem...its weird how you never can run away from the truth...Keep writing TK
Your friend,
SwimmerGirl

That's really good. And all very true. You messed up a line though:
"It's always there where you like it or not "

shouldn't "where" be "whether"?