|Reviews for The Serpent of Truth|
| A Heart of Blades 1/4/05 . chapter 1
I don't think I really understand the full meaning of the poem. But it's definitely interesting and a poem I enjoyed.
| SweetWithUncertainty 8/5/04 . chapter 1
Interesting poem...its weird how you never can run away from the truth...Keep writing TK
| Coping Mechanism 8/5/04 . chapter 1
That's really good. And all very true. You messed up a line though:
"It's always there where you like it or not "
shouldn't "where" be "whether"?