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| not sure yet 2004-08-16 ch 1, | abusei love that last line, very powerfully put, if i do say so myself, a very strong poem in all actually, filled with a lot of imagery and sort of gave the mood of his death, the taste of it, more so than his actual thoughts or reasons, i like that a lot, muchly excellent job with this one |
| TheChosenOne 2004-08-14 ch 1, anon. | abuse...damn it you kick **! that's an amazing poem right there I love the last line - that's a great song your music taste is unbelievable XOXo meg |
| mmoonsshiner 2004-08-10 ch 1, | abuse*it does make sense* i love it beautifuly delivered. ^_^. your greatness inspires me. |
| Mormon Princess 1 2004-08-09 ch 1, | abuseInteresting! Not in a bad way, but in a good way! |
| logical-unreason 2004-08-05 ch 1, | abuseJoy division ** rule. |