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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseFor old times' sake, indeed. Good poem. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| alicesun 2004-11-29 ch 1, | abusevery cool! can't help thinking of April Fools, though. |
| Val Mora 2004-11-04 ch 1, | abuseThat's weird. Well, obviously, of course, but weird in a sort of familiar way. Although I'm not sure whether the phrase "scare you to death" is meant to be literal or hyperbole... I like the ambiguity. Lovely rhyme, by the way! |
| Werecat99 2004-08-12 ch 1, | abuseOohh, I absolutely loved this! Creepy and yet sweet in a morbid kind of way. Loved the last two lines. |
| Helgmelia 2004-08-07 ch 1, | abuseFor some reason or another, the first ten lines don't thrill me. But I really, really, really like the last six lines. And there's just something about "And I'll scare you to death / For old times' sake" that is interesting to me. Can't quite pin-point the reason, but I like it a lot. |
| lobsteremily 2004-08-05 ch 1, | abuselovely. psychotic poems are the best. |
| Arutha 2004-08-05 ch 1, | abuseWhoa, hey, that was awesome. I have no clue what it means, but it was written extremely well. Keep it up. |