 Twilight Starr 2007-11-02 . chapter 1For old times' sake, indeed. Good poem.
~Twilight Starr~ |
 alicesun 2004-11-29 . chapter 1very cool! can't help thinking of April Fools, though. |
 Val Mora 2004-11-04 . chapter 1That's weird. Well, obviously, of course, but weird in a sort of familiar way.
Although I'm not sure whether the phrase "scare you to death" is meant to be literal or hyperbole... I like the ambiguity.
Lovely rhyme, by the way! |
 Werecat99 2004-08-12 . chapter 1Oohh, I absolutely loved this! Creepy and yet sweet in a morbid kind of way. Loved the last two lines. |
 Helgmelia 2004-08-07 . chapter 1For some reason or another, the first ten lines don't thrill me. But I really, really, really like the last six lines. And there's just something about "And I'll scare you to death / For old times' sake" that is interesting to me. Can't quite pin-point the reason, but I like it a lot. |
 lobsteremily 2004-08-05 . chapter 1lovely. psychotic poems are the best. |
 Arutha 2004-08-05 . chapter 1Whoa, hey, that was awesome. I have no clue what it means, but it was written extremely well. Keep it up. |