Please keep going. I am obsessed with this story. I've read all the bits and pieces from the Complications arc. I really want everything worked out with Kay and Josh. I love them together. I love these characters so much. This story has made me cry and yearn. Love you for writing this series.

Meh eh

I like it.

-Shay

Great chapter :) I love Nicky/Josh dynamic! Please update soon!

I love this whole series and really hope you c

You should stop worrying so much. The Josh and James scene was perfectly refreshing, a spark of good happenings in this sea of overwhelming drama. Not to say that the drama is too much; it's very real. This just was a good way to have made the audience smile.

Anyway, I'm loving the Complications arc with a passion. I can't wait to get it all finished.

Nathan

Well, the chapter was good. The ending was kind of cute. The last scene in general was.

Hello! I'm a returning old fan who read your stories years ago. I saw in my inbox an update from you not to long ago, and I can't tell you how thrilled I was. I restarted from the first part and just now finished LION. I am impressed with the rewritten series, so much more was put into it. Thank you so much for writing for us. Please continue, I look forward to the new rewrites/updates. Take care. 3

Josh read my mind. I miss Dan too.

I love LION very much. This chapter was really sweet; I guess this is the turning point in their relationship as Josh is warming up to Nicky... sorta. Haha, I was hoping for some Josh/Dan action! I love J/D so I hope there will be some in the next chapter. Happy holidays! :-)

3 Josh and Nicky interacting, soooo adorable. I liked the last scene even better than the domesticity from the first scene of the chapter and Josh staring at Kay's dad and thinking about where Kay got his looks and some mannerisms from. Haha sounds like Kay has good genes. ;)

I think that u should just stop judging yourself and just keep going, keep writing, post it as you go no matter how much you hate it and then you can go back and edit it all later

That being said I love it I love the characters and the way they interact with each other and I wish that u would post more often but I also understand that you do have a real life that gets in the way so thanks for giving us what u can

this is lovely! I really like that Josh is comfortable with Kays kid. I really really liked this one. I can see how they, Kays kid and Josh became who they are later.

this update made my day! thx

Psh, this chapter was actually fantastic and I'm so happy yoive updated because I love all of your characters. It's so nice to see Josh warming up to Kay and Nicky.

What the hell... WHERE IS DAN?!

... the ending was well he completely deserved that and Josh is seriously being a huge ass jerk. uinjdck I mean he doesn't even bother to fix things with Dan first and I hate characters who are unaware someone like them for gazzilion chapters before they find out and go "oh!". And after he makes Dan so upset he just leaves and hunts down Jenssen!? hsdszjkci At first I was like ok as long as he doesn't go back to Kay since I have no idea why but I don't want them to end up together (yes I am still all for Dan and Josh or at least Dan getting a good partner at the end. I mean he must!) but poor DAN!