|Reviews for Twilight Falling|
| a silenced revolution 3/11/07 . chapter 1
It's beautiful and sounds a little sad to me. I like it.
| pointythings 6/22/05 . chapter 1
This has some really nice wording and imagery, and I like the lining, for the most part. My only problem is that there are a couple of places where I think you overdo it a little on the unusual rhyming, but it's your poem, so far be it from me to judge. I'm just saying I think it gets a little weird in places. Other than that, it's in writing,pointythings
| D 6/7/05 . chapter 1
| B.C.E 8/5/04 . chapter 1
I like it- i haven't read a whole lot of poems before that have the one word lines like you have in this one. Are they supposed to be like that? It really doesn't matter as long as it's good, i suppose, and yours is. i found it to be pretty.
"Our passions which divide us like the deviation of sweet discourses"- I love that line, it's really great, my favorite in the poem. Anyways, keep writing!