Brillant. I'm certain that I've read this story before because it's in my favorites, but It was definitely worth reading again. A truely original story.

why did he kill himself. He just lost all my respect for him with his stupid selfish actions. suicide is overrated

thanks for ruining the ** ending you jackass, Al. god i hate people like that

I'v read her story 3 times and every time i am Captivated. i'v have spoken with Silver Hornet wall in production of this story. the end of this story is an alternate.(duh) she told me once that she could not think of what to right.

great story. I really enjoyed the read. Thanks for every word.

Oh... my... god...

Thank you. For a no holds barred amazingly romantic and yep simple story. You didn't much it up, you just told it like it is!

AMAZING! The only weird part is the last line... "And then Ivan decided that his life was not worth living and he killed himself." huuh? I guess i can understand writing stress ^_^ still! Awesome story! I loved it! I love Ivan and Nitria! Yay! I'd ask for a sequel but it seems almost complete already! I'm not sure if u would have enough material to write a continuation. Meybe about Abigail's adventures i don't know. Awesome stuff though.

what a beautiful ending... i really love reading it... so happy... Y-Y

GAH , you definately would hav ehad people hunting you down if you ended it with Ivan killing himself

gri didn't care for the way you ended it . But on a whole It was most excellant !wonderful job

blacky

YAY ! ...again YAY

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YAY

ugg south park does that to me too . Then everything i write comes out rather vulgarand sarcastic you poor thing lol

blacky

hey hey hey !Now! not fair trying to kill off my favorite character here !great story

blacky

Aw poor poor nitria ...gets the great guy and then sobs her out at the sight of any other male ...I like it

^_^

blacky

well i dont kno about the other guys but I LOVE THE STORY ...though judgeing from the number of reviews you have i'd saytheylike i too . ^_^

blacky