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| Auralay 2004-10-26 ch 1,  | abuseWow that is really deep and moving i had to read it a few times to get the hearts merging together at the start but I got and it's really beautiful. Great work Love and bubbles *@*LAURA*@* P.s please R&R my work |
| Wandering Flame 2004-09-09 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is simple yet meaningful. I like the hearts thumping together, it's romantic and not something you would ordinary see in a poem. Uhh or at least for me hehe. Anyways, keep up the great work! |
| Twizzlers 2004-08-22 ch 1, | abuseWow, that is so cool. That was the first thing that crossed my mind after I read this. I loved how you worked the thumps together until they were one. That just might have been the coolest and most unique love peom ever. : ) (oh, and I didn't even have to read it twice before i got it. : ) ) Great job with this. You are so creative. >>Twizz |
| E.C James 2004-08-10 ch 1, | abuseSimple, but it got the point across, and I liked the title. It definitely draws your attention. |
| EchoesOfReason 2004-08-10 ch 1, | abuseAh, holy crap I just got it... I'm slow yeah but that's amazing! It's deep, just the fact that it's so short and the entrance is that strong it's deep, very deep. They calmed each other down, to a slow, steady beating of the heart where it beat as one...very VERY nice, I'm like wowed now hehe, this is simply amazing. That's it, you're going on my reccommendations list! Take care, great job, and good luck! Love, a.twisted.soul |
| LunaSilverthorn 2004-08-10 ch 1, | abusesounds good billy. |
| negligible fictional force 2004-08-10 ch 1, | abusehello. again. it occurred to me that the mistyping was a fault of fictionpress. and hey, this poem's cool. i've never seen sounds used in such a manner. keep this up. |
| PineTheFae 2004-08-09 ch 1, | abuseSimple, yet beautiful. |
| John Barley 2004-08-09 ch 1, | abuseVery odd Will but I get it. Pretty odd though. |
| Gothic Spook 2004-08-06 ch 1, | abuseI think I get it! The "thump"s at the beginning are their heartbeats coming together as one. Is that right? Either way good idea and I love it! |
| Moira Lenore 2004-08-06 ch 1, | abuseI like this one, the imagery and look of the words gives it a wonderful feel. Nice job. |