Oh yeah! That's completely kickass! Great... great.

O...shiver! I love the phrase "melted mesh"--totally holocaust picture. You're first stanza is excellent. Keep writing!
-Aillil

loved it... you really have a lot of talent. visited ur livejournal for a peek. now i know where you get your inspiration. hold on cause you've got a shitload of talent
.:flash:.

This one was good too . . . seriously though, you gotta stop cussing on the profile and stuff or people are gonna report you.